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Cicle of Life 2.0 by SomaIV Cicle of Life 2.0 by SomaIV
I just stopped at this point because I felt like there is more to fuck up than improve. :D
Feedback is always welcome. 



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Software: Adobe Photoshop CC 2017
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olq-plo Featured By Owner Edited Dec 19, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
I kinda feel this would have looked better with a blurry background to put emphasis on the singled out objects in the scene. The lightening coming in from those little holes is really nice, but the light in the rest of the scene is diffuse and doesn't suggest there's such a light source coming this way, it looks like a cloudy day, while the lightening inside of that... thing (can ?) just makes me think of a sunny day. I also think the details on the ground should get thinner near the horizon line. 
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SomaIV Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay the fact that you call this a "can" is not good because It's supposed to be a robots head (at least what's left of it.) :D

There are a lot of problems with the composition to which I didn't pay attention at all. However I think that the object is emphasized enough since it's the only object to be seen.
It is a cloudy day yes and I actually forgot to make the cast shadow on the ground diffuse as well. Other than that metal doesn't show shadows on itself.
Where the shadow is there are just the reflections instead of the shadow beacuse...physics.

The lighting inside with the light rays is not really thought through. I thought maybe there is a lot of dust flying around inside or very humid air but there is no 
real logic behind it. However the light rays are completely possible if, as I said, there was dust or humidity or something.

Thanks for your feedback :D
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olq-plo Featured By Owner Edited Dec 19, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
I guess I missed a chance shut my mouth xD 
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SomaIV Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Why would you shut up? :D
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olq-plo Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Because.
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SomaIV Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
...is not an answer. :)
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olq-plo Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
quiet 
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SomaIV Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Tell me whyyyy CURSE YOU! 
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